Beyond The Door

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Entering the void and the dark of another

lonely night he cries cutting through the

darkness of evil that awaits him to hold

his hand and guide him

 

His feet finds footings yet does he

retreat from the dark or move forward

with fear in his heart while his soul passes

through his mind losing sense of

time space and reality

as the thin air lingers

 

This tomb appeared before him

the doors shut loudly in his ear

and angels heads appeared to be

mocking him in fear with

cold alabaster faces

 

Trying to catch his breath in thin air

that beckoned him into the shelter of

the grave he felt life begin to leave for

a spell to dwell elsewhere

amongst tired souls

 

Left there so long ago while weeping

widows caressed their brows and gave a

last kiss of death burying the key

that opened and closed the door for

ever more

 

The angels said in gentle voices why

pause or wonder why you are here

when the doors have closed and

left you cold and lonely for

the nights beckoning whispers

 

The door of death is your journey’s end

let them open inward and release all the anger

within and come forth gently close behind you

and let the next entereth sorrow

to the graves bitter song

 

So lay in silence awaiting with

folded arms whilst the wind and tide

of destiny awaits you under moonlit night

and deep within light your spirit

to freedom from your shallow grave

 

Rejoice for now you are released and

poets await your verse and song deep

the chasms of your burnt out soul

a song can be heard you sung so long ago

on mother’s breast so white as snow your

first breath set aglow upon the earth

 

Let this door close on a life that was

not meant to be so misdirected through eternity

it will live on for cherub’s await thee to

hear your song and weep

no more the pain is gone

 

My door of life closed twice yet

before it’s close should I see

the parting of Heaven’s door

or enter all I need to know of Hell

 

© Copyright Vincent Moore 2010. All Rights Reserved.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

11 Responses to “Beyond The Door”

  1. Julianna says:

    You can feel the character in the poem although you cannot see him. I could hear his breathe and heartbeat moving rapidly as the words unfolded. Brilliantly written! Poetry that can be truly appreciated!

  2. Vincent Moore says:

    This work was penned with a melancholy heart. I yearned for what I had lost. A marriage that ended after 19 years, the loss of my children by the use of a vile tongue. All of this cursed me that night and my Muse brought these words to my mind, I was exhausted after scribing this horrific piece and I laid my head to rest with great difficulty. Yes my heartbeat was beating fast and those words left my quill. It was a tough scribe indeed. Hugs my friend.

  3. Amy Johnsen says:

    So very beautiful, mystical, mysterious…………and yes, sad. I always enjoy your writing. This piece is truly exceptional!

  4. Yes, I too, could feel the emotions of the poet. Spiritually we die many times during our lives, just to rise again after we have spent some time in hell. After each hell we ascend to a higher level nearer to heaven. This poem touched my soul. Awesome!

  5. This poem is so dar, seep, yet amazing as it pullsthe reader in as though the reader also cannot go back . We hve to reach the end. It really is quite brilliant, Vincent.

  6. marcoujor says:

    Vincent,

    It is good to know you now in the perspective of your life’s journey. The pain, virtually the death, of the life you experienced is palpable in these expressive words. Yet, I agree, that through your descent, you have been able to surface in an enlightened and beautiful presence that is most inspiring to so many who absolutely adore you.

    And I know that I am one of your ‘lead groupies’, baby! Haugs and squeezes, mar.

  7. Vincent Moore says:

    Thank you Martie for your understanding what I was conveying in this piece. I have often drifted between heaven and hell in my life and my Muse took the opportunity to bring this one out of me. I am happy it touched your soul as it did mine.

  8. Vincent Moore says:

    Dim thank you for your comment. I try so hard to use as much visualization as I possibly can in order as you say to pull the reader in. I am always very happy when a commenter expresses that they felt part of my work, they couldn’t stop reading it and in many cases were drawn back to read it over and over again. Hugs

  9. Vincent Moore says:

    Thank you again Maria for your support and kind words of encouragement and friendship. I have descended from time to time to the pits, the deep Abyss, the hell and my Muse pulled me back in time to keep my sanity. I am also very inspired by many of my fellow scribes and you my dear are right up front with Martie and Dim. I am thankful for your friendship and hope to be your friend for some time to come. I have a “Groupie” Lol…I love that thought. I know I am a fan of some as I am of theirs and of course you I am a big fan of. So thanks again for leaving me a comment at my new site, much appreciated.

  10. Sunnie says:

    Lovely poem and so happy to join you on your site! Such beautiful Blog..
    Love
    Sunnie

  11. Vincent Moore says:

    Sunnie so nice to see you. I love this picture of you. A very pretty lady indeed. Thank you for stopping by for a read and leaving your comment. Much appreciated. Love and hugs from me to you.

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