Entering the void and the dark of another
lonely night he cries cutting through the
darkness of evil that awaits him to hold
his hand and guide him
His feet finds footings yet does he
retreat from the dark or move forward
with fear in his heart while his soul passes
through his mind losing sense of
time space and reality
as the thin air lingers
This tomb appeared before him
the doors shut loudly in his ear
and angels heads appeared to be
mocking him in fear with
cold alabaster faces
Trying to catch his breath in thin air
that beckoned him into the shelter of
the grave he felt life begin to leave for
a spell to dwell elsewhere
amongst tired souls
Left there so long ago while weeping
widows caressed their brows and gave a
last kiss of death burying the key
that opened and closed the door for
ever more
The angels said in gentle voices why
pause or wonder why you are here
when the doors have closed and
left you cold and lonely for
the nights beckoning whispers
The door of death is your journey’s end
let them open inward and release all the anger
within and come forth gently close behind you
and let the next entereth sorrow
to the graves bitter song
So lay in silence awaiting with
folded arms whilst the wind and tide
of destiny awaits you under moonlit night
and deep within light your spirit
to freedom from your shallow grave
Rejoice for now you are released and
poets await your verse and song deep
the chasms of your burnt out soul
a song can be heard you sung so long ago
on mother’s breast so white as snow your
first breath set aglow upon the earth
Let this door close on a life that was
not meant to be so misdirected through eternity
it will live on for cherub’s await thee to
hear your song and weep
no more the pain is gone
My door of life closed twice yet
before it’s close should I see
the parting of Heaven’s door
or enter all I need to know of Hell
© Copyright Vincent Moore 2010. All Rights Reserved.

You can feel the character in the poem although you cannot see him. I could hear his breathe and heartbeat moving rapidly as the words unfolded. Brilliantly written! Poetry that can be truly appreciated!
This work was penned with a melancholy heart. I yearned for what I had lost. A marriage that ended after 19 years, the loss of my children by the use of a vile tongue. All of this cursed me that night and my Muse brought these words to my mind, I was exhausted after scribing this horrific piece and I laid my head to rest with great difficulty. Yes my heartbeat was beating fast and those words left my quill. It was a tough scribe indeed. Hugs my friend.
So very beautiful, mystical, mysterious…………and yes, sad. I always enjoy your writing. This piece is truly exceptional!
Yes, I too, could feel the emotions of the poet. Spiritually we die many times during our lives, just to rise again after we have spent some time in hell. After each hell we ascend to a higher level nearer to heaven. This poem touched my soul. Awesome!
This poem is so dar, seep, yet amazing as it pullsthe reader in as though the reader also cannot go back . We hve to reach the end. It really is quite brilliant, Vincent.
Vincent,
It is good to know you now in the perspective of your life’s journey. The pain, virtually the death, of the life you experienced is palpable in these expressive words. Yet, I agree, that through your descent, you have been able to surface in an enlightened and beautiful presence that is most inspiring to so many who absolutely adore you.
And I know that I am one of your ‘lead groupies’, baby! Haugs and squeezes, mar.
Thank you Martie for your understanding what I was conveying in this piece. I have often drifted between heaven and hell in my life and my Muse took the opportunity to bring this one out of me. I am happy it touched your soul as it did mine.
Dim thank you for your comment. I try so hard to use as much visualization as I possibly can in order as you say to pull the reader in. I am always very happy when a commenter expresses that they felt part of my work, they couldn’t stop reading it and in many cases were drawn back to read it over and over again. Hugs
Thank you again Maria for your support and kind words of encouragement and friendship. I have descended from time to time to the pits, the deep Abyss, the hell and my Muse pulled me back in time to keep my sanity. I am also very inspired by many of my fellow scribes and you my dear are right up front with Martie and Dim. I am thankful for your friendship and hope to be your friend for some time to come. I have a “Groupie” Lol…I love that thought. I know I am a fan of some as I am of theirs and of course you I am a big fan of. So thanks again for leaving me a comment at my new site, much appreciated.
Lovely poem and so happy to join you on your site! Such beautiful Blog..
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Sunnie
Sunnie so nice to see you. I love this picture of you. A very pretty lady indeed. Thank you for stopping by for a read and leaving your comment. Much appreciated. Love and hugs from me to you.